It's a good concept and a very good message!! I'm not totally sure what you mean at the bottom...do you mean you will build trust and not break it because its slow and hard to build but very easy to destroy?
Well...ok...I wasn't trying to say that that's the reason you don't want to break it. Trust is something that is important, special, and necessary...I just couldn't think of how to make it fit in there with all the other words I've got in there. So I'm not saying that you don't want to destroy trust because it's hard build...but I'm seeing that that's how it's coming across...hold on...I'm going to revise this poster.
I really like how you designed trust but...idk because I've never done a design before so this is coming from someone who doesn't really know much about this but....maybe the tr in trust could be a little more bold. when I first saw it I had to take a second look to make sure I had the right word. also did you mean I special or just special? and did you mean I build it or just build it?
Okay...I've made some changes. I agree about the 'tr' so I switched some stuff. As for the 'I' that's actually a separator bar not a letter...but it did look like a letter so I changed it so it's not confusing!! Does it look less confusing now??
It's a good concept and a very good message!! I'm not totally sure what you mean at the bottom...do you mean you will build trust and not break it because its slow and hard to build but very easy to destroy?
ReplyDeleteWell...ok...I wasn't trying to say that that's the reason you don't want to break it. Trust is something that is important, special, and necessary...I just couldn't think of how to make it fit in there with all the other words I've got in there. So I'm not saying that you don't want to destroy trust because it's hard build...but I'm seeing that that's how it's coming across...hold on...I'm going to revise this poster.
ReplyDeleteRevision Complete. Okay...I like it even better now!
ReplyDeleteI really like it now...very true message you're getting across!!!! ummm...can I get technical?!?:/
ReplyDeleteThank You!!! Absolutely..go ahead!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you designed trust but...idk because I've never done a design before so this is coming from someone who doesn't really know much about this but....maybe the tr in trust could be a little more bold. when I first saw it I had to take a second look to make sure I had the right word. also did you mean I special or just special? and did you mean I build it or just build it?
ReplyDeleteok...that might be a little too technical...sorry:/
ReplyDeleteOkay...I've made some changes. I agree about the 'tr' so I switched some stuff. As for the 'I' that's actually a separator bar not a letter...but it did look like a letter so I changed it so it's not confusing!! Does it look less confusing now??
ReplyDeleteYes it does!! Now the message is VERY clear as well as VERY good!!!!:)
ReplyDeleteGood!! AWESOME!!!...I think I might do a series of these kind of posters!!;)
ReplyDeleteI think that would be really good...definitely something you're good at and it would be a good use of your talents!!!!:)
ReplyDeleteMe too!! I'm thinking about maybe getting this made into a t-shirt as well...we'll see!!
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